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I Met a Woman who Cared

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We talked
        stayed up late
                we were best friends
She wanted me to tell her
        what love was
                I told her
Ecstatic one afternoon
I showed her the ring on my hand
Her face became blank
"O Jessica" she cried
        "why would you give up so much freedom"
This was written in my English class. It's an imitation of Gregory Corso's I Met this Guy who Died
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RussianTim's avatar
Well done! I couldn't find the other poem to compare it to but I really like this.